 BOWILLIE
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Date: June 19, 2005 @ 10:53 AM
hi!..this tune rocks dude!
very good vocals and instrumentation
is burnin!great tune
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happyhappyhappy
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Date: June 19, 2005 @ 12:18 PM
Like a shooting star...ACROSS THE NIGHT!
seriously, some great hooks here; I dig the piano line that comes in at 3:13.
Very impressive. 
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GreatGooglyM...
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Date: June 19, 2005 @ 1:24 PM
This is very nice! The lyrics are the thing I like most in this song. The acoustic guitar gives a nice feel and this song proves your versatility as a musician. Piano, guitars, drums etc. Everything blends nicely. Sorry mate, I've got no complaints. Very straightforward and catchy. I'm waiting to hear this on radio. 
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 onewhodreams
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Date: June 19, 2005 @ 2:37 PM
Yeah, this is a very well-rounded song. It makes me feel good. Diggin' the lyrics too. 
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Hatsy
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Date: June 20, 2005 @ 10:02 AM
Your vocals really shine on this one, dreamy harmony & tight dynamics, very Brit pop sound only better than most of the stuff I've heard. Love the line about precious time... The acoustic sounds full & crisp/colourful & then the electric solo adds some icing,  I agree with Strat, radio friendly & creative touch at the end with piano, a melody that won't fall away easily & who would want it too. The big thumbsup here Jay Another fine sculpture from a very talented artist with a multi genre ability.    
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 moam
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Date: June 21, 2005 @ 6:08 PM
Great voice  I love the harmonizing Very interesting layout to this song It keeps me interested the whole way through  I am downloading this
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milesov
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Date: June 25, 2005 @ 1:42 PM
good track. the acoustic sounds great. rest of the instrumentation is good as well, and depth in the mix. nice lil wah section in there. its like the song you heard before but can't place kinda familiarity to it. if i had to guess, like goo goo dolls sorta. definitely a radio possibility as others have mentioned.
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 furiousBall
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Date: June 28, 2005 @ 2:52 PM
i really like the reverbed out slide that walks in during the chorus. very gilmouresque singing and guitar playing. the drums sound a little off in the turnarounds during the verse. i really like the way you recorded the acoustics, you get lots of the body in the tone. nice song, the fuzzy wah solo is great.
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 yearbook
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Date: June 30, 2005 @ 8:48 AM
Man, I am liking this from the first note!
brilliant guitar work! I am impressed with the vocals too! reminds me a bit of CSNY but more modern! This is a cool cool track man!i dont know what else to say really! words cant do it the justice it deserves!
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ebarbarella
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Date: July 2, 2005 @ 8:36 AM
wow Awesome  love your style very nice guitars and vocals are lovely 
playlisted
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autodivine
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Date: July 4, 2005 @ 10:59 AM
greally cool.. nice riff/start..
kinda kicks off like 'along the watchtower'.. nice
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 shutyatrap
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Date: July 9, 2005 @ 10:20 PM
Some great guitar and harmonies on this track. Full of hooks in it lyrical context. Kind reminds me of Crowded House at times. This is a really good song and the piano sound at the end really gives it as extra edge.
Steve
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shadowself
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Date: July 12, 2005 @ 9:44 PM
LOVELY! The drums could use a little tightening - they sound stumbly. the production sounds wonderful, even on these crappy laptop speakers. 
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imemine
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Date: July 19, 2005 @ 10:16 PM
Wow---just jumps right in there---guitar tone is awesome. Sweet harmonies. Sounds a little loose around the beat but hey----I dig that “jam” sort of feel---Ooooo---the wah-guitar is killer! ---Nice break into the acoustic and piano. Wonderful song writing! Great stuff man!!!!!
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 Traf
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Date: July 22, 2005 @ 2:24 PM
Guitar sounds really sweet.. and those harmonies are great...
Really like the melody...
Love the climbing wah... 
Yeah, mix is pro and everything is where it should be..
Cool song..
Nice way of ending with the halving of the tempo..
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 tsand19151
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Date: July 22, 2005 @ 8:22 PM
nice, very nice....loving the vocals. sweet sounding guitars like Traf mentioned. kool arrangement also. radio ready to me as well.....
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ChillinBuzz
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Date: July 22, 2005 @ 9:19 PM
another fine composition what can i say that the others havent  I LIKE IT! 
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GeneHilbert
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Date: July 24, 2005 @ 3:01 AM
This is pretty rough overall - the intro was a little odd. Vocals are a little pitchy here and there. Instrumental clams and missed beats.
However – Dudes....! This has some very magical moments in it. Capture those - that is what you want to bring the entire composition and recording. I like this tune - although this might be the original production and recording - and have value as such - make damn sure it is not the last.
This is a damn fine piece of writing – I want to hear the recording present that. Work this bitch, make it shine and sparkle. This can be kick-ass.....
Good Job
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Snoogans775
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Date: July 31, 2005 @ 7:27 PM
the vox are pretty, and I love that effect, it retains so much original voice color, considering the voice is the only pure instrument next to a glass harmonica and synths, I'm glad you have found an honest vocal sound.
and I must agree with the guy above me, the mix is hard to get into, it's very noisy, which is reasonable considering HOW MUCH INCREDIBLY FOCUSED, PRISTINE instrumentation there is, but right now it is at a very enjoyable state, but this song is epic, and I hate when the keys sound wierd, it happens when they first come in, and throughout the playing, in wierd I just mean off-time.
beautiful song,
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zeropage
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Date: August 8, 2005 @ 6:53 PM
hey, great guitar grooves all around! sure like the vocals. not bad for only 1 person doing all the music + singing, lol! This is a beautiful track with some realy catchy hooks! you are the master of multitrack recording!
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FitzInStereo
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Date: August 10, 2005 @ 9:49 AM
Good song, but the drums don't seem to sync up very well sometimes...maybe out of phase? Anyways, nice job.
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Apertome
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Date: August 10, 2005 @ 3:14 PM
This is awesome! I do agree that the drums being off can be distracting, and I think there are some phasing issues going on here; but this is an awesome song. Sweet guitars and bass especially. Tighten up the drums and fix the phase problem and it's perfect. Awesome.
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mystery-machine
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Date: August 11, 2005 @ 9:56 PM
Sweet song! I'm diggin the guitars and keys in this a lot.You have a nice voice. The arrangement is reeeally good! I'm liking this bit at 3:10 where you break it down after the solo. Excellent dynamics!PDcool!
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Jpolitte
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Date: August 15, 2005 @ 6:37 PM
Whats up.. Just came by to check ya out..Real good stuff. I like the vocals. Thats one thing thats hard to find and you've got it. I also dig the guitar work that comes in bout midway through.
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MarcSalmon
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Date: August 16, 2005 @ 3:39 PM
this is awesome man.. the vocal harmonies you sing very well and create a great uplifting atmosphere..
Loving the breakdown around 3.10.. the acoustics are really nicely recorded..
I like how you've layered this song, creates a really nice texture yet it's nicely produced so doesn't sound muddy which is easily done.
The only thing i'd say is the drum pattern threw me off at the beginning.. im not sure if its a timing issue or perhaps you should try a different beat.
Great song though.. well done 
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pancreaspuppet
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Date: August 19, 2005 @ 9:04 PM
These vocals are fantastic. You certainly have something going on here. The way the melodies flow, and the tone & phrasing - it all really works well. Great track.
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MagneticFlui...
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Date: August 21, 2005 @ 5:57 PM
Excellent song! I love the playing of everything, and I think the drums really add a great unique feel to this that keeps the song on edge.  Great vocals and guitarwork. Great production job. This is a cool song too. Awesome job!
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Lachatte
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Date: August 28, 2005 @ 8:00 AM
I think you've written a very good song. It has a nice vocal melody, harmony, and lyrics... Nice guitar playing. But I think that the drums often interfere and almost detract from the whole feel of the song.
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kingo
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Date: August 28, 2005 @ 10:49 AM
I'm not sure at all how I missed this.
At any rate I'm hearing it now. It's excellent. That chorus is really awesome,the backing vocals work very well, the melody is incredible. I dig the "woah oh" parts, too, a lot.
Wow, and that second verse... That slide guitar is tasteful and really adds a lot.
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evansorchid
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Date: September 2, 2005 @ 11:04 AM
Cool track. I really like the melody and the atmosphere that you've created. There are lots of interesting things going on here with the guitar and keyboard. Your voice sounds fantastic!!! The changes at the end of the song are great. I'll definitely have to check out some more of your stuff.
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soundsseeker
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Date: September 3, 2005 @ 3:09 PM
great  love your lyrics -- just an excellent tune--
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anotherhugo
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Date: September 4, 2005 @ 10:54 AM
happy tune!
it's great, a very warm sound from the acoustic guitar and all the other instruments sounds great too! hey! piano comes in. it's nice man!
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pancreaspuppet
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Date: January 10, 2006 @ 10:00 AM
Hey Nice song! Voices are really nice, the production of them is pretty crisp too. I feel like the whole thing needs a little tightening though, if anything. I think I'd enjoy this a lot more if it was live.
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joycedavis
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Date: August 25, 2006 @ 12:42 PM
i love this one, too. your fine voice, crying guitar, acoustic guitar. yeah
peace  ----jd
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